The Animal Statues by Jessica H

There were three animals. A bull a horse and a goat. The bull was called Harris the horse was called Daisy and the goat was called Billy. They were just having an ordinary day all of a sudden a huge gush of wind came. All the animals were swept up into mid air.

“I don’t feel well,” they all groaned .

They felt weird they couldn’t hear a thing except for a buzzing sound. Out of nowhere they fell out of the sky and onto the ground. Everyone and everything went back to normal except for the animals, they turned into statues and stayed like that forever.

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  1. Hello Jessica,

    There seems to have been some mystical power at work here to have swept up the animals only to drop them to the ground to become statues. Well done for sharing a creative storyline to explain the strange statues in the photo.

    Your story is well written although there were some small errors you missed when editing. With your creative ideas and growing writing skills, I hope you can continue sharing your adventures.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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