Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear by Emily

″ Can we go to the carnival now?”
” Yes”.
Going to the carnival we met my friends we walked down to the carnival.
” Mam can I try to win a teddy bear?”
” Yes”.
” Mam I won a teddy bear!”
” Wow!”
We went to a different part of the carnival a whistle blew and everyone disappeared, I thought I was dreaming , but I hurt my self so I new I wasn’t dreaming. Me and my friends tried to find everyone, but we couldn’t find anyone.
BOOM!!!!
It was something on the beach. It was a huge bomb we were scared so we went home very fast!

2 thoughts on “Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear by Emily”

  1. Hi Emily,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done!
    You’ve left me wondering what is going on here? I’m glad you hurried home to safety!
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork

  2. Hi Emily, I’m happy for you that you won the Teddy Bear, but not so happy to find out you were caught in such a dangerous situation. I thought it was a dream too, but it seems I was wrong!

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