Shipping Problems by Aaron

I just finished my driving test and passed it. While I was on call with my mam she was so happy and asked me to stop at the shops on the way home. I decided to go to SuperValu because I was going to get myself a nice round muffin. I was driving nervously as it was the first time on my own. I got to SuperValu and someone had dropped a big fat cabbage on the floor so seagulls can eat it. I got my shopping, payed for it and while I was walking out….BANG a seagull hit a window.

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  1. Aaron,
    The narrator seemed to have it all going their way until that pesky seagull flew into the window. I wonder if that shook the driver’s nerves enough to make the rest of the drive home a shaky one.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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