Santa’s Elf by Aaron

One Chirstmas Eve it was my turn to help santa deliver the presents it was very hard but fun. When we got to the last house we said we done well but the problem was when we got back we looked to see if the kids liked their presents. Although it was Saturday nothing was opened we thought we done something wrong but it was just because it was two in the morning. A few hours later we checked on them again and they were jumping with joy with their toys. We were really happy because we done a good job.

4 thoughts on “Santa’s Elf by Aaron”

  1. Hi Aron.
    I wonder what time the kids woke up.
    How long did it take you to deliver all the presents.
    Good job on delivering all the presents with Santa.
    Bye for now Kristupas Mrs Boyces 5class

  2. Hi Aaron
    I liked your story because I love Christmas
    I like the way you used the prompt
    great story
    Bye for now Liam A
    Mrs Boyces class

  3. Hi, Aaron! I really liked your story! I don’t believe in Santa myself, but I really liked this story! It was like you were Santa’s helper! I’m so glad that the children were happy with their presents! A suggestion is that YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY! Anyways, great story!!!

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