Sailing by Kayleigh

One night we were on a ship in the most dangerous sea EVER. It had sharks, octopus, whales and worst of all sea urchins. Loads of boats were passing some of them looked fancy. The boat driver spotted a very familiar ship. It was huge. Way bigger than ours. I spotted a little black thing coming out of the side of it. The ship turned quickly. I fell. “It’s a cannon” my mum said. “I’m scared” I said back. What will we do our ship is barren. The boat driver said ‘gosh not these miscreant people again’. They shot our boat and it broke.

2 thoughts on “Sailing by Kayleigh”

  1. It’s good but its a cliffhanger and when people do this it really infuriates me because it gets so good and then it ends it deserves a 10/10.

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