Run by Nathan

I was spray painting concrete with my friends when someone called the cops. I could hear and see the cops. I ran away trying to dance out of the grasp of them. I jumped over the red, long scooter. When I fell over luckily my friend saw me out of the side of his eye and launched me back up on my feet. The cops were consistently saying ‘come here now and you will not be hurt.’ I did not believe them so I kept running home in until I lost all of the cops it took a while but I kept on running and lost them.

3 thoughts on “Run by Nathan”

  1. Nathan,
    I liked the way you used danced in this piece.
    I find it sad that the narrator did not trust the authorities—after all wasn’t Nathan doing the wrong thing in the first place?
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. I love your story and why did they call the cops because that seems weird to call the cops for no reason.

  3. Hi Nathan
    I like the way you used detail and exciting sentences like ‘I ran away trying to dance out of the grasp of them’ and ‘ When I fell over luckily my friend saw me out of the side of his eye and launched me back up on my feet.’ in your piece of writing.
    Keep writing these are great.

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