Random Voice by Ben

I was walking down the road on a nice Sunday evening when I heard a crazy sounding voice from the ally “Hello” said the voice. “I don’t like whatever your plan is so please just show yourself!” I said while scared for my life. The voice spoke again. “Which way is the shops” he panted. “I’m only going to show you the way if you show your identity” “Fine” it was a man in pitch black clothes “Tell me now or else there’ll be a lot of trouble.” “NOW” I didn’t want to tell him in case he tried to kidnap me so I made a run, but I knew from this moment on I made a huge mistake.

One thought on “Random Voice by Ben”

  1. Hello Ben,
    I’m frightened just reading your words on the page! I liked how you moved a lot of the story through dialogue. Don’t forget to re-read for correct or missing punctuation!
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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