Jack woke up and asked his Dad if Uncle Ben could come to the park with them after breakfast. Later on Dad, Jack and Uncle Ben were playing in the park when they heard a strange noise coming from a creepy house at the edge of the park. Dad had to go home for a business meeting, so Jack was left with Uncle Ben. “We better go inside” said Uncle Ben.
So we went inside the house and to our surprise there was a Christmas tree talking, it was possessed by a ghost living in the house. They ran out of the house.
I think that you writing was very interesting. I hate it when i hear strange noises. What happened after you ran out of the house.
I love “Possessed Christmas Tree” because it is funny and it has common horror knowledge, “lets go inside!”
Jake Avery