Poor Mike by Eden

One cold, frosty November evening, Mike and his family were having dinner. They all had had a long day so they were all pleased to have dinner together. A little while later, after dinner Mike began to feel ill. His parents thought that he would be ok so they just told him to lie down. Then he felt really ill so his dad decided to bring him down to the local doctors. The roads were quite frosty so they decided to walk down the quiet streets. When they got there the doctor told him he only had a stomach ache.

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  1. Hi Eden
    Apologies I’m a bit late with the comment but it was a very busy week a bit like the family in your story. This is a very well written 100 word challenge. It’s great when families can sit down to dinner together and you’ve shown how pleased they were to be doing that after a long day. I was worried for Mike when he began to feel really ill but your story had a happy ending so all’s well that ends well! I think you used the prompt very creatively. Well done.
    Máire O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
    Galway, Ireland.

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