Oh! No! by Cillian

It was a normal Saturday when my friend called me. He asked me if I wanted to go to Dublin city centre with a couple of other friends. I said ok and we all met up at my house and walked down to get a bus. When we arrived,we saw a man painting something like a storm and the main colour was cerulean. Later we went to a shop and I dared my friend to steal something and he did but the camera caught him. When I arrived home I turned on the tv and changed the channel to the news. Oh no! we seemed to be on television!

6 thoughts on “Oh! No! by Cillian”

  1. I love the way you chose the way of the narrative to end on because all through out the story it made me want to read on. It was really exiting for me.

  2. Very interesting. I loved the part were you came home and notice d you were on television. From Lloyd Bidston Avenue Primary School.

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