Odette by Rose

Odette was very busy, she needed to come up with a design for the clothes competition. There is literally no other way to make 1000 euros in 5 days for the medicine her grandfather needed urgently. She decided to make a rose themed dress, the amount of time it took for the dress to be created was absurd, but it had to be perfect. She left her work for the night and took a nap. But in this time a little girl ghost named Crimson saw the dress. ‘Remarkable…’ She phased into the dress and stayed in the dress until sunrise. Odette brought the dress over to the competition, unaware what might happen next.

3 thoughts on “Odette by Rose”

  1. Hi I like how you said “ Remarkable “ in quote because I wouldn’t have thought of that.
    Was Odette a human? Did you figure out what she was?

  2. Hi Rose! I really like this story you made. It’s very creative and cool. My favorite part is when I got to meet/hear about Crimson. Keep making stories!

  3. Hi Rose,
    I loved your story this week. Well done.
    I loved what Odette was doing for her Grandfather.
    But what an ending…you will have to write a part 2 and let us know what happens next!
    Great work this week.

    Wishing a very Happy Christmas to you and your classmates.
    Keep writing in 2021

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


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