New Year Party by Cian

It was New Year’s Eve and Stephen and his friend Darragh were at the celebrations in Dublin city, fireworks were merrily cracking away.

BOOM! CRACK!

Everyone was singing and happily dancing, there was a man in the middle of the river Liffey playing the drums, when suddenly an extremely bright light shone from stage he was playing on. Stephen half looked away because the light blinded him, Darragh grabbed him and asked if he wanted to go get something to eat so they headed to the chipper. After a while they left the chipper and they headed for the train.

One thought on “New Year Party by Cian”

  1. Hi Cian,
    Excellent story! I like your use of onomatopoeia when describing the sound of the fireworks. I especially like your idea for the blinding light and all of the Irish details throughout your story. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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