New House by Luke

We are moving house, my sister doesn’t want to because she won’t see her boyfriend. Her and my parents had a debate on why they shouldn’t move to the new house. When we got there it was so bad there was a bin tipped over and paint flaking off the wall. We got a good house in the estate. Some houses were very small some had no garden, one house literally looked like it was on fire! The inside was not bad. We all got our own room and our dad had an office for his job. The move wasn’t too bad.

One thought on “New House by Luke”

  1. This house you are talking about reminds me of the house my parents had when i was 3
    I like how you had a reason why your sister didn’t want to move
    I would recommend more adverbs
    How did your sister react when she couldn’t see her boyfriend

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