Murder Yacht by Luke

This is the story on how I nearly died. “Hi everyone”, said the billionaire. “Let’s go below deck so I can sign the papers,” he said. We got down to the dining area for the company signing-over but then darkness enveloped the room and there was a loud gunshot. The lights then came back on and the billionaire’s son was dead. I said I wouldn’t mind finding who did it in the morning. In the morning there was a scream when I got there the actor had a knife in her back she said she didn’t see who did it. I had a theory on who did it…

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  1. I think my class did this prompt! I think you should try to put comma’s into your compound sentences. For example, the lights came on, and the billionaire’s son was dead. I like how you said: This is the story on how I nearly died. Who did it? I’m excited to find out! Nice story!

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