Jim’s Very Big Mistake by Ben

Patrick and Jim had landed on a desert island after a horrible plane crash. They had both been extremely lucky and survived. They were on an island with basically unlimited food like coconuts and bananas. ” I found buried treasure under a tree, we will open it together do not open it without me or else!” Said Patrick angrily. Patrick ran off out of sight. Jim had nothing to do so instead of waiting, he thought “but I had to see what was inside.” He knew that Patrick would be disappointed and he knew he was careless so he ran and… “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Screamed Patrick. And after that moment they never spoke again.

One thought on “Jim’s Very Big Mistake by Ben”

  1. Hi Ben
    That was a good story and they luckily survived because plane crashes are hard to survive.
    by Deivydas.

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