In The Forest With My Friend by Amy

My friend Lorena Holly and I went back to the forest. There was heard to be a hunter in there but we thought it was fake.

“Are you sure it’s fake?”said Holly

“It has to be” I said. We went out into the forest and we heard someone else walking. The hunter was heard to carry a flash light everywhere and then we saw a flash of light then darkness.

“Is that his flash light?”said Holly.

“I think it is”said Lorena.

“I dont know” I said. We got a bit scared but kept going. All of a sudden we heard a gun shot! We knew it was the hunter so we ran away.

2 thoughts on “In The Forest With My Friend by Amy”

  1. Greetings from Australia Amy. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. I liked your choice of ‘There was heard…” which made your text seem like a cautionary tale. Using first person to tell the story through a conversation was engaging, and I really wanted you and Lorena Holly to be safe! I was glad that you decided to run away, and not face the hunter. I enjoyed reading your writing this week. 🙏😊

  2. I have been in the forest before. I like how one of the friends were questioning about the story being real. Will they ever meet the hunter or make sure it was?

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