Halloween – by Holly

It was that spooky night of the year again called Halloween. I used to love Halloween until 3 years ago… A boy I knew loved Halloween like most children do. But one year he decided to go to this terrifying castle where a witch and her cat lived. Everybody knew about this castle but nobody dared to step foot near the thing. The castle reminded me of a time when I was little because I lived next to a humongous house. Everyone knew that I lived next to a huge house so all my friends decided to wait at the gate with me. But silly boy still went into the castle and never came out.

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  1. Hi Holly,
    Well done on writing your 100 Word Challenge. I was really hooked from the beginning as I had no idea what happened three years ago, but then you started talking about your house and never went on to include what happened to that boy!
    Next time, try to heighten the tension by giving more detail around the dramatic part of the plot.
    I would love to know what was going on in that castle!

    Ciara (Team 100)

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