Guns by Darragh

Jerry woke up.

He heard gunfire from outside. He went to investigate. Suddenly he felt someone put a gun against his head. Jerry quickly ducked and tried to grab the gun but the man punched Jerry in the face. Jerry fell on the ground. The man quickly stuffed Jerry into a red bag and ran away. Jerry woke up and tried to move but his arms and legs were tied up. He tried calling for help but nobody came. Suddenly a door opened and the man stepped in holding a gun he said “come with me!” Jerry shouted, “No!”

The man pulled out his gun and shot Jerry.

One thought on “Guns by Darragh”

  1. Hi Darragh, I really liked your story this week. The story was a bit choppy so try to make your sentences flow more.

    Sincerely,
    Kam

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