Fluffy Puppy by Rorí

The builders laid the red concrete as I walked my Fluffy. ‘Stay.’ I said. I took my eyes off him for two seconds and he took off like a scooter into the concrete. One off the men chased me up the hill! I ran so fast I basically danced up the hill. We went to my house my mam asked me if I was alright. I said I was and she made me a hot chocolate. I told her I just got chased by a 6ft man up a very steep hill. My dog had puppies and they’re so cute.

3 thoughts on “Fluffy Puppy by Rorí”

  1. Rorí ,
    Isn’t it just like a puppy to be a bit mischievous? I like the way you showed how fast he was using the simile with the scooter.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. I like how its about a dog and why is The concrete red because maybe you live somewhere special in the story?

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