First World War by Emily

Bang! Bang! The loud gun shots began. It was 1918. The locals were terrified. Even sixteen year old’s were soldiers. All mighty soldiers were fighting for their lives. Gun shots were firing everywhere. It was a very horrible time to be alive. People hiding everywhere, trying not to be seen. Families were very worried for their loved ones. Soldiers think they are going to live. It was a big disaster. People screaming for help. The Irish captain was wearing a red long coat and the British now was wearing a red poppy for remembrance.

4 thoughts on “First World War by Emily”

  1. Hi Emily
    I liked this story because it is interesting
    I wonder why the war started
    Good story From Warren Mrs Boyces 5th class

  2. Hi Emily.
    I like your story.
    It reminds of a book I read called poppy field.
    I didn’t know that even 16 year olds had to fight.
    Bye for now.

    From Ronan, Mrs Boyces class.

  3. I really liked the story you should make another about what happens after the war. It was really good bye for now.

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