Elephant in the Orchestra by Mia

Today was the day I had been waiting for forever. Today I was going to play a solo. As I prepared to enter the pit. I picked up the violin and walked towards the pit when I noticed it. The big purple elephant and it was not happy. It had a hostile look on it’s face. I ran as fast as I could. It chased after me smashing several expensive painted ceramic pots. In a blind panic I threw my violin at it. Shattering the violin. It’s then that it dawned on me. It was right behind me.

4 thoughts on “Elephant in the Orchestra by Mia”

  1. Hi Mia
    I liked your story because it was intense
    I hope you were ok
    I wonder why the elephant was so hostile
    From joe
    Mrs Boyce’s class

  2. Hi Mia.
    I like your story.
    I like the word hostile that you used.
    It reminds me of a story I wrote recently.
    By for now.
    From Ronan.
    Mrs Boyces class.

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