Diplodocus by Craig

I was watching this tv show and this happened, the TV show was about a Diplodocus that was Orange and the adventure of Captain Willis. Captain Willis was wanted to find the diplodocus that’s Orange. So he went to Diplodocus land and he found all types of different diplodocus go with the beautiful grass , waterfall and flowers. Captain Willis went deep in the caves and then suddenly he found an orange diplodocus the orange one spoke first “go away right now or will spank you”, captain Willis took a picture and ran. He showed the world his discovery.

3 thoughts on “Diplodocus by Craig”

  1. Hi Craig,
    this story is funny I Love it but I can’t Read it without reading the part 10 time before understanding it sorry about that complaint but It is just hard to read 🙁
    but overall it is funny Dino’s aren’t meant to talk
    From Natasha

  2. Hi Craig
    Your 100WC is really unique. Do you like dinosaurs a lot? I love the idea of an orange diplodocus. Who knows? Maybe they were orange! You have managed to use the prompt in a really normal way. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  3. Good story Craig
    I really liked the sentence were the diplodocus said “go away right now or will spank you”
    From oliver

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