Patrick’s Diary
Last week I had the craziest most exiting and odd Saturday I have ever witnessed. I woke up in a castle called ‘Felix Castle’ at nine o’clock, but what really woke me up was, firing cannons. Suddenly, the boss of the castle shouted “We are fighting ‘Chaxie Castle’ they are a monstrosity, they won’t stop until they win, so be careful.” ‘BOOM!’ My castle had blasted 10 cannon balls at once and demolished ‘Chaxie Castle’ and now it was barren. But there was a very big problem, they were spotted by many news reporters who were filming and described the people as a menace. Soon after, all the people who were involved apart from me, were gone to jail for 50 years.
I really love how much detail you put into your story It really felt like i was in it
I really liked your story. I would like to know why you were attacking ‘chaxie castle’. Other than that I loved your story . We have legos that we can build castles with , do you have legos?
Hello ben
I like your story because I really felt like this happened long ago
What was the captains name
Goodbye Jayden
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Hi Ben
I really liked your story
It must have been a fright when you woke up in a castle and cannon balls were getting shot at the other castle
Joshua
Mrs Boyce’s class
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