Christmas Day – Charlie

s was Christmas Day. Joe and his brother Philip were out having a snowball fight, Philip was chucking snowballs at Joe. Joe was losing then he hit his brother right in the face with a huge snowball. They decided to stop and build a snowman, they had a huge garden so this was easy. After 15 minutes they had finished building the snowman, it was the best snowman ever! They decided to go inside and raced each other up to the window Philip won and looked in the window he saw his uncle put his present under the Christmas tree.

3 thoughts on “Christmas Day – Charlie”

  1. On a very hot New Plymouth, New Zealand day, I do like the sound of the fun snow fight Charlie. I wonder what Phillip was hoping would be in his gift?!
    Do you think it’s necessary to write ‘the snowman’ twice in this sentence …. After 15 minutes they had finished building the snowman, it was the best snowman ever!
    How might this sound instead …. After 15 minutes they had finished building the best snowman ever.
    What do you think?
    Have a wonderful Christmas and a great new years learning in 2019.
    Jackie (Team 100WC)

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