Best Friends by Kyle

Once upon a time, there was a fox and a wolf. The fox was ginger, brave, skinny and kind. The wolf was white, long, slender and trust worthy. They were the best of best friends. During the autumn they were very crafty. They loved making pictures with the leaves and playing games together, rolling through the plants. They also loved going on adventures. One snowy Christmas morning when they were just wandering around, the two of them discovered a huge castle. They agreed that they would go inside and explore it. This would be one of their best, most exciting and remarkable adventures yet!

3 thoughts on “Best Friends by Kyle”

  1. Kyle,
    I feel like I could picture the characters from your descriptive language. I am on the edge of my seat awaiting details of their continuing advenures.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100 and Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hello Kyle, this is a very well written piece of writing. It provides you with an opportunity to add to the story if you wanted to do so. Your descriptions are so good and you were able to make me see the fox and the wolf as real characters who I liked and was interested in. I hope they have lots of adventures together (ones that you can create). Well done.

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