Bang by Nathan

Slurp Slurp ahhh ‘I can eat this cabbage soup all day’. I said to myself.

Knock Knock!!!

Knock Knock!!!

‘Go away!!’ I shouted. I went to turn the channel when all of a sudden.

BANG!!! the sound was from the roof I thought. BANG!!! It got louder.

BANG!!! I jump out of my seat.

‘Mr Gray, Mr Gray.’ I heard I ran nervously trying to open the cellar.

It was locked. I saw the intruder on the stairs.

He had a round black mask on with a gun in his hand.

I beg him to spar my life.

BANG!!!!