Bad Day by Mya

One cold icy winters morning Lily was walking to school and twisted her ankle. She slipped on the ice. She went to school. When she went in a bully named Clara tripped her up in front of her crush. The bully wouldn’t stop bullying her. Lily thought to herself about the bully…… if only it was a bit smaller. The class had to stay in for the hole day because it was a miserable day. While she was was limping home while it was lashing rain she had €10 to go to the shop. She saw a homeless man and gave him the money instead.

2 thoughts on “Bad Day by Mya”

  1. I have twisted my ankle before. You had good describing words or adjectives. You could have had different sentences like a compound or complex sentences. What happened after you gave the homeless man the money.

  2. I have twisted my ankle before. You had good describing words or adjectives. You could have had different sentences like a compound or complex sentences. What happened after you gave the homeless man the money

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