Alien Teacher by Cillian

It was a nice sunny day and Max was lying in bed until his mam shouted “Wake up or you’ll be late for school! She opened the curtains and the light blinded him. It was 8:30AM and school started at 9:00AM. Max got up quickly, rushed downstairs to have breakfast and sprinted to school. He just about got there in time. When he went into class, he saw a substitute teacher writing her name on the whiteboard. Her name was Mrs.Bite, pretty weird name. He presumed she was normal but when she turned around her face was like a shark’s and she had loads of sharp teeth. Max shouted OH MY GOSH! and ran.

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  1. Hi Cillian,
    Great story! Very imaginative interpretation of the prompt phrase and very relatable. The teacher with the shark face was a creative idea- well done. Just make sure to always put speech marks around dialogue so it is clear which parts are spoken by characters. Keep up the good work.
    Michael (Team 100wc), Coventry, UK

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