Me and Caroline were walking to the vet with the injured puppy in my arms. Before we went in we saw mysterious rocket .It had steam coming out. Me and Caroline quickly dropped the puppy at the vet. Caroline said “Um , I think we should go out now “.”I agree “. After a while we went outside to see what was out there .”OMG what are they “. The creepy bins said they were alien bins. They also said that they were going to destroy the town . We quickly ran down to the beach. “We’re going to be dead ” cried Caroline. The alien bins captain had a big smile on its face .I have an idea . That’s when the real adventure started……………
By Najat
Well done Najat. I enjoyed your story. Be careful of your punctuation so that your story can be easily understood.
I love the sentence about the alien bin with the big smile!
Keep up the great work.