Abandoned House by Ben

Yesterday my friend and I went to an abandoned house. On the way there we went to Tesco to get torches. Before we got into the house we saw a chair move outside the back. In the house we found a note and it said don’t open till Friday the 13th. Although it was Saturday and nothing was opened we took it home to see what’s inside it. It said that someone was going to kill the everybody by sending killer drones around the world and that he was in a lab making them.

4 thoughts on “Abandoned House by Ben”

  1. Hi Ben,
    This is a very creepy, interesting story!. I like how the note said don’t open till Friday the 13th. ‘the scary day’. What happened to you and your friend?. How many killer drones were there?.
    I hope to see more creepy awesome writing from you!.
    From Milah.

  2. To Ben, I really like how you said that Yesterday my friend and I went to an abandoned house. The best part was that Before we got into the house we saw a chair move outside the back. In the house we found a note and it said don’t open till Friday the 13th.
    From Aiden

  3. Oh WOW! Oliwia, It’s no pressure then! Killer drones about to be released and the fate of all in your hands. I hope you got the news to the authorities in time. I really enjoyed this story and liked how you squeezed in lots of detail. Well structured and creative piece of 100WC work,.

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