A Good Day by Aaron

One morning I woke up and the lights in my room were flickering. When I ran out of my house the sky was black and I was scared. Suddenly my lights stopped flickering I went back in my house and made an egg with lots of salt. After I went to get washed. When I showered, my mam came over and went to the barbers to get her fringe cut. Soon after we went for lunch in the Brick Room. I got pancakes my sister got sausages and my mam got an irish breakfast. When we finish we went to celebrate my mam’s birthday.

5 thoughts on “A Good Day by Aaron”

  1. Stories of breakfast, very nicely done! A great job of weaving the words of the prompt together. I enjoyed reading this.

  2. Hi Aaron
    I like your story this week because its very realistic. I like the way that you used the five words because when you put one you put 2 or 3 in the same sentence.
    Well done
    From Matthew D
    Mrs Boyce’s class
    Please comment on my story.

  3. Hi Aaron
    I really liked the way you put the prompts in the story.
    It reminded me of my moms birthday.
    How old is she?
    Bye for now Marc
    Mrs Boyces class

  4. Hi Aaron,
    I like the way it was your mom’s birthday.
    I would have been scared as well if the lights started flickering.
    Them pancakes sound scrunches.

    By For now Danny Mrs Boyce’s Class.

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