5 Years by Rose

5 years. I was in this room for 5 years. Why was I here, and how come no one came for me? All I remember was when someone came and hit me in the head. Then woke up In this room. I was given food and a bed but every day I tried to get out.

”Let me out! Why am I here?!”

But each day I grew more and more hopeless.

‘’Please! Let me out! Help!”

Until I just gave up.

I was finishing off my breakfast, until I heard a knock on the door.

I looked at it in disbelief

I ran over to the door, stumbling on the way. I was banging on the door harder than ever.

”Help! Is anyone there! I’ve been stuck here forever, please I-“

The door flew open and I fell to the ground, I looked up and saw an uneven ball of clay. It formed into an unnatural being and started running to me at full speed, barely giving me enough time to get up…

2 thoughts on “5 Years by Rose”

  1. Hello Rose,
    What a tragedy to have been held captive in a room for five years without knowing why only to finally be let out and at the mercy of an unnatural being. You certainly know how to build tension in your well written story.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. We did this prompt too. You made a really good story all of the dialogue is cool. What happened after when the thing started running at you?

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