28 Cheese St by Ben

Today Johnny was doing the scariest thing he has done in his life, go inside 28 Cheese Street, the abounded apartment. Johnny had been wanting to do this for ages but never had faith in himself. Johnny brought a knife with him in case of enemies nearby. Johnny knew that this wasn’t going to be an easy task but he did it anyway. Johnny stood in front of the spooky apartment. ‘I guess it’s now or never.’ he thought. He climbed silently through the half broken, shattered window. As soon as he crept in he heard an old man’s voice, turned out someone lives there. Will Jonny escape without being noticed?

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  1. My class didn’t like this prompt but I thought it was ok. I’m not so sure but I’m pretty sure the number was 29 not 28. Why does Johnny want to go into the abandoned apartment? This was a very great job.

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