100 w/c – Mia B

Oceanworld was a beautiful place. It was an underwater village with trees and houses and the Mermaids and the Mermen lived there. Earth people fished on it.

It was a very hot summer in 1958, the sun shone all day and all night too. Oceanworld started to get smaller and smaller as the water tried up. The villagers had a meeting and decided to swim away towards Atlantis before they were all killed. They said goodbye to Oceanworld and swam away before all the water disappeared forever.

All that is left of this beautiful city are the trees and the abandoned boats that used to sail there.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c – Mia B”

  1. Oh wow, Mia. This is a stunning piece of writing. It’s so sad that they had to leave because the water dried up, but I’m glad that they were able to get to Atlantis safely. Awesome work this week, Mia – well done!

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