100 w/c by David

“Wake up” shouted mam.  “Why” said David.  Were going somewhere.  Where ? David asked.  I’m not going to tell you.  So they went.  But where were they going .  A couple of minutes later they arrived at the airport. Where are we going, please tell me, said David. Were going on a aeroplane .  I know that.  They got on the aeroplane .  He still Didn’t know where he was going until his mam told him, Were going to America .  YAY David shouted .  It was the best holiday ever and the best surprise ever .  They had a holiday of a lifetime.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c by David”

  1. Oh David – I’d love to be given a surprise like that!
    A surprise trip anywhere would be wonderful, but a trip to America would be an added bonus.
    Good work this week – keep it up.
    Mrs Boyce

  2. What a brilliant surprise, David! Like Mrs. Boyce, a surprise trip anywhere in the world would be great, but I’d really love a trip to America! What a holiday of a lifetime that would be! Keep up the good writing!

  3. What a wonderful surprise that would be. We’ve been to California in America (my sister lives there) but I can tell you the flight is VERY VERY long. Still I wouldn’t mind getting a surprise like that. Well done on your story this week.

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