100 w/c Dale

My friends and I were in the zoo one day with our parents. Near the end of the day we got separated form our parents and we had to spend the night in the zoo alone. Then I said ‘so what lies ahead of us now lads?’

When I turned around one my friends Dylan was gone.  We had to go look for him and on the way we saw a big brown bear in his cage eating some salmon.

We ran for our lives from the bear even though he was behind a big cage. When we felt safe we stopped running and looked out to a pond and there was Dylan, staring at his favourite animal, Florence the Flamingo!


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  1. Hi Dale,
    Well done on completing your first 100-word challenge.
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    I’m glad you found Dylan. You had me worried there for awhile. I had thought that just maybe the brown bear had caught him and was eating him!
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce


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