100 w/c – Me and My Brother – by Dylan B

My brother and I went trick or treating.We went in a spooky house.I just thought it was decorated,but it was not decorations. As the door slammed, I knew there was trouble. So we ran as fast as we could.I ran into the door.My brother stopped right in front of the ghost. Zombies, mummy’s,ghost and vampires were running right at us.So I dropped my sweets and ran upstairs.So did my brother.We hoped they didn’t get us and kill us and eat us. Aaaaa! Oh no they found us.

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  1. Hello Dylan,

    It seems the fun of Trick or Treating ended in a very real encounter for you and your brother. A spooky house with ghosts, zombies, mummies and vampires seems ideal to scare anyone who dared to venture inside. Well done.

    Leaving your story with “to be continued” leads me to wonder what might happen in the future. Did the Halloween creatures claim another two Trick of Treaters or was this just some well designed trick being played on you?

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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