100 w/c Ben F

One Halloween I was out trick or treating with my friends. I was dressed up as a ghost, Haylie was dressed up as a ‘cereal’ killer and my other friend Dylan was dressed up as a zombie. We where having lots of fun calling from house to house, until we took a short cut down the dark alley way to the spooky house. We went into the garden and walked up to the door. The door was left slightly open so we pushed the door gently and called out ‘trick or treat’. There was no answer, so we quietly crept inside to have a look around. As the door slammed I knew we were in danger. Next we heard a loud laugh, we turned around and standing there were our parents, they had tricked us!

5 thoughts on “100 w/c Ben F”

  1. A fabulous story Ben. You’ve put a lot of thought into it and it shows. I really love the idea of the ‘cereal killer’ costume. It made me laugh. I was delighted to learn it was your parents playing a trick – even if it was a cruel one. I’m sure they thought it was very funny!

  2. This is very well written, Ben. I love the ending part which gave me a sense of relieving and it summed up the story in a fun way!

    Best,
    Sindy (Team 100WC)
    Edinburgh, UK

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