100 w/c by Abby

Once upon a time there was a big haunted house. I decided to go in to see if there was anything interesting inside. I couldn’t believe it, there were cobwebs and creepy spiders everywhere.  The windows were broken and mucky, the curtains were dirty and ripped. The door closed really loudly and I got a shock.  It was rally dark and I got scared.  I was shivering and saying ”get me out!” There were lots of noises of the broken windows, the wind was blowing in.  Then the lock clicked, the opened, it was my Dad, he saved me.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Abby”

  1. Wow, Abby, that all sounds like a pretty terrifying experience! I’m glad that your Dad saved you. I think that I would stay away from haunted houses… I don’t like things that frighten me! Good work, well done!

  2. Oh very scary! You’ve used great adjectives to describe how scary this house was – ‘haunted’ ‘creepy spiders’ ‘cobwebs’. I’m glad your dad came to the rescue. Super story!

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