100 w/c – Zach

The year was 1983 it was a nice day. A man named Daineal Orange got up and went to have a bath he turned on the radio on, it said “War Has broken out, the fighters are everywhere!”

Daniel packed up for the army when the letter came to his home. After five weeks since war broke out Daineal very clumsily dropped his gun on the ground. Suddenly all the shooting stopped and music was playing. The enemy raised a white flag. The enemy army danced and peace was made they said “Let’s not dwell on the past.”

BANG a shot was let out…

3 thoughts on “100 w/c – Zach”

  1. Hi Zach,
    I really enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    You’ve included the 5 words seamlessly into your story.
    I was delighted that peace was made…but the last line has me worried. Has war broken out again?
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


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