100 w/c Tadhg

It was a long day for Jake and Neil. The two young boys were invited to ride a submarine for a day. It was all started well but not for long. The sub crashed into a rock. It had a huge leak. It was terrible. “We might sink!” screamed Jake. The old sailor who had to steer the submarine found a some metal and said that they could cover the hole with it. Neil said “if only it was smaller we could fill the hole”. It did not work so they taped a large plastic box to the hole. “It worked!” shouted the sailor. They later made it back.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c Tadhg”

  1. While I think you were writing an adventure story for me it was scary as the thought of sinking in a submarine… well it scares me. I don’t know if you did it on purpose but I really liked the bit where the solution mirrored the characters; the old sailor imagined something bigger solving the problem while Jake (who would be smaller) thought something smaller would save the day.

  2. Nice job. I like the part when they use the plastic box to cover the whole.
    Nothing was wrong. Awesome job.😎

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