100 w/c Tadhg

It was Paddy’s Day 2019. Dan and Red drooped Jen off at the dance studio. She was going to be in the parade. ‘It’s like a concrete jungle.’ It was a cold enough but sunny day in Dublin. Dan and Red were waiting at the Bridge. They watched as the parade went by. There was a big fluffy dog cart it was quite funny, the dog danced into the dancers. There was a bit of trouble in the city. A teenager on a electric scooter came flying into Jen’s dance crew and hit Jen. It was a disaster! Jen and the teenager were brought to hospital in a red ambulance.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c Tadhg”

  1. Tadhg,
    OH NO! It was all going so well, until the mishap. Lucky for Jen and the teenager that there was an ambulance ready to take them for treatment.
    Good job applying the focus words in your piece.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Nice story!
    At the beginning I saw you were trying to spell dropped but you put drooped.
    Other then that you did awesome.

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