100 w/c – Rhys

My name is Sam I’m 11 years old, I danced the night away at my cousin’s party to Kung Fu Fighter. Even though I was dancing very clumsyily, it was a great night. I couldn’t wait to get home and relax in a nice hot bath as my legs were aching. When I was finished in the bath I went to bed to try get some sleep.I think I over did the dancing as my legs were so sore. I eventually got to sleep. I woke up with no aches. I was very happy to see the organge sun rising.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c – Rhys”

  2. hi Rhsy,
    your piece was really entertaining! did you know that if fall you got to get up and dance again, because all you really remember is the ending! dancing is one of the most traditional of cultures through out the world.
    maybe next time you could be a little more descriptive with your writing. you have to wow people with your words. i think you can make it to the special showcase if you try.
    good luck and happy writing!
    from Zoe in Illinois,
    contact me at https://kidblog.org/class/am-ray-rockstars-201819/posts/0m1pwtl4vvxwqu2scfojqef5k.

  3. Hi Rhys,
    I taught your story was very good.
    Write more stories like that please.
    From Naglis
    Mrs Boyce’s Class

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