It was a Saturday and a rainy day. I was having a lazy day. I needed to call my little brother in because it started to rain. When I came back in I needed to have a bath because the mud splashed up on me. When I got out of the bath my big brother was running down the stairs because there was a fighter on the television. After the fight there was a dancer on the television. She was amazing! When she finished dancing the next person that danced, danced very clumsily. The 1st person won the dance competition her name was Milly Orange.
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Hi Niamh,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
It sounds like a busy Saturday at your house.
I love watching the Dancing Competitions on the tv at the moment.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
Hi Niamph! I like the way you Added that someone danced clumsily. That’s funny. I wrote about someone waking up, eating an orange, and playing video games. I think you should add someone playing video games. But other than that your writing is awesome! From Joseph in Illinois. https://kidblog.org/class/am-ray-rockstars-201819/posts/9hryen6vjj8ojcosyrv52uwvh