100 w/c Mia

Once upon a time Adi was her name. ‘YO Adi! ‘ Shouted Emily and Ashley from her class.

‘Do you wanna come down Beech Woods with us?’ Said Ashley.

‘Okay’ replied Adi.

They had their lunch and went to the woods. Adi thought the woods was creepy but wouldn’t admit it to the girls. They walked for about an hour and suddenly they were in the middle of a clearing . They came across a yellow doll’s house. Yellow was Adi’s favourite colour. Suddenly they decided to turn around there was a bike stuck in the tree…

3 thoughts on “100 w/c Mia”

  1. Mia,I like the part where Adi thought the woods was creepy but wouldn’t admit it to the girls because it sets the scene.The speech guides the story on to carry it.

  2. Hi. I really like your story it’s exciting and it makes me want read more and more of it!
    I enjoyed all of your dialogue it was very amusing.
    I think you could add some wow words 🙂

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