100 w/c – Jessica M

On Sunday morning I was watching television, and while I was watching the tv we seemed to be on the television on an ad. That’s when I remembered that my ballet teacher took a video of me, and my friends. I did not know that she was going to put it on the tv. It was to incerage more people to come to the ballet classes, and it worked. On Saturday there were a lot more children, she also told me, and my friends that she put the video of us on an ad. Then we all started to laugh because we already knew we were on it.

4 thoughts on “100 w/c – Jessica M”

  1. Wow Jessica, This work was Fantastic! I loved that you used ballet as a baseline. It made me feel I was watching the advert! I like the way you told the reader that you had already seen the advert when the teacher had told you. Do you take ballet classes? I would love to know what happens next. Keep it up!

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