100 w/c – Jessica M

One day Mrs pretty was on a walk. She was walking for a long time when she saw a street called Gorilla Street. She saw man running, he run by her and was saying something but Mrs pretty did not understand. She saw his hands they were yellow Lego man hands. After a while she started to walk and she saw a man made out of bricks but he had human hands. Mrs pretty thought about the other man and thought that it was rather unusual. The man look af her strangely, as if having a different body part was normal …

2 thoughts on “100 w/c – Jessica M”

  1. Jessica M. ,
    Your use of the featured words as names was a clever way to handle that challenge. Who inspired you to do that? (Don’t forget to make the proper nouns capital letters to make it obvious to your readers, though.) Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Hub Buddy, Guilderland, NY, USA

    1. This story is so cool! Its also really funny. But next time make sure to look your story over carefuly. Great job Jessica keep writing. Anthony, Hub buddy, USA

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