Bang!
What was that? Nothing.
What was it Ellie Orange?
It was just me hitting off the bath.
Mam can I go to hip hop?
How come you want to go to hip hop all of a sudden?
I want to be a dancer when I grow up so I need to learn to dance.
Did you know Molly wanted to be a fighter when she grews up, although she does it clumsily?
That does not matter, are you sure you want to go to hip hop?
Yes I am sure.
Ok then I will sign you up.
Hi Jessica! I liked the transition word “although” and the theme of dancing. Did you know I don’t like to dance. I think you could check spelling in the future for example, when you wrote “grews up”. What is Ellie Orange?
-Danny in Illinois
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