100 w/c – James

One day my friends and I were so bored because my other friend dared us to look at the clock for the rest of the day, so we gave up. We cycled to the forest, so my other friend could not see us. When we got to the forest we heard a strange noise and it was actually a snake! I know! It’s crazy that I can even write anymore! It looked at me with its red eye jumped at me but I just dodged it. Before I could catch my breath it attacked my friend! We are so lucky to even be able too walk.

4 thoughts on “100 w/c – James”

  1. Very exciting story James! I enjoyed your use of vocabulary and how suspenseful the ending was. Nice work!

  2. Hello James… Being dared to watch a clock for the rest of the day??? I cannot even begin to imagine the boredom. I’d rather tackle a huge basket of ironing to watching the clock. I like how you worked in the prompt words and the ending had me on the edge of my seat.

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