100 w/c – Hannah

On one sunny summers day I was walking to school when I bumped into my friend. Did I tell you that my friend loves playing pranks on me but she does not like when other people prank her? Suddenly I came up with an idea. I will pull a prank on her. She really hates snakes, so my prank will definitely involve snakes. I got one of my toy snakes and put it in the drainpipe at her house just before she got into the shower. I waited and then I heard a terrifying scream.

” MMMAM THERE’S A S…..NAKE IN THE SHOWER AND IT CAME DOWN THE DRAINPIPE…”

3 thoughts on “100 w/c – Hannah”

  1. Oh what a cruel prank to play on your friend. At least it was only a toy snake so it couldn’t do any harm. I think if you’re going to play pranks on people, you should be prepared for revenge!!!

  2. Hello Hannah! Thank you for posting on the 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed some of the precise vocabulary you used (bumped into) and your writing for effect at the end, in the use of capitals for the speech. I agree with Avril’s comment above – you need to be prepared for revenge! Thank you for entertaining your readers. Well done! I look forward to reading more of your 100WC posts in the future.
    Mrs. T., Wiltshire UK 100 Word Challenge Team

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